Title: SV2 - Various Editorial Defects

PDR Reference:				97100029
Originator Reference: 			SV2EDITO1
SARPs Document Reference: 		SV2 SARPs, Section number see below in
                                   			 "Summary of Defect"
Status: 					ADOPTED
PDR Revision Date: 			20/10/97 (SUBMITTED -> ACCEPTED -> PROPOSED)
						29/10/97 (RESOLVED)
PDR Submission Date:  			06/10/97
Submitting State/Organization: 	ATNP WG3/SG2
Submitting Author Name: 		Picard, F
Submitting Author E-mail Address: 	picard_frederic@stna.dgac.fr
Submitting Author Supplemental 
Contact Information:			ph 33 (0)5 62 14 55 33,
						fx 33 (0)5 62 14 54 01
SARPs Date:  				IV1.1, March 97
SARPs Language: 				English

Summary of Defect:  

Part 1 (CM)
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1/ 2.1.5.3.2.2.1:  Change "application service priority" to "Priority Quality-of-Service" and italicise Priority
2/ 2.1.5.3.2.2.1:  Change "RER Quality of Service Parameter" to "RER Quality-of-Service parameter" and italicise RER
3/ 2.1.5.3.2.6.1.1 b)4)i):  Delete "QOS" and italicise Routing Class
4/ 2.1.5.3.2.6.1.1 b)4)ii): Delete "QOS" and italicise Priority
5/ 2.1.5.3.2.6.1.1 b)4)iii):  Replace "QOS Residual Error Rate" with "RER parameter value" and italicise RER
6/ 2.1.5.3.3.2.1: Change "application service priority" to "Priority Quality-of-Service" and italicise Priority
7/ 2.1.5.3.3.2.1:  Change  "RER Quality of Service Parameter" to "RER Quality-of-Service parameter" and italicise RER
8/ 2.1.5.3.3.2.2: Change "application service priority" to "Priority Quality-of-Service" and italicise Priority
9/ 2.1.5.3.3.2.2: Change  "RER Quality of Service Parameter" to "RER Quality-of-Service parameter" and italicise RER
10/ 2.1.5.3.3.7.1 b)3)i):  Change to read:  "if provided, the CM-update service Class of Communication Service parameter value as the D-START Routing Class parameter value," and italicise Class of Communication Service and Routing Class
11/ 2.1.5.3.3.7.1 b)3)ii): Delete "QOS" and italicise Priority
12/ 2.1.5.3.3.7.1 b)3)iii): Replace "QOS Residual Error Rate" with "RER parameter value" and italicise RER
13/ 2.1.5.3.3.8.1 b)3)i):  Change to read:  "if provided, the CM-contact service Class of Communication Service parameter value as the D-START Routing Class parameter value," and italicise Class of Communication Service and Routing Class
14/ 2.1.5.3.3.8.1 b)3)ii): Delete "QOS" and italicise Priority
15/ 2.1.5.3.3.8.1 b)3)iii): Replace "QOS Residual Error Rate" with "RER" and italicise RER 
16/ 2.1.5.3.3.10.1 b)4)i):  Change to read:  "if provided, the CM-forward service Class of Communication Service parameter value as the D-START Routing Class parameter value," and italicise Class of Communication Service and Routing Class
17/ 2.1.5.3.3.10.1 b)4)ii): Delete "QOS" and italicise Priority
18/ 2.1.5.3.3.10.1 b)4)iii): Replace "QOS Residual Error Rate" with "RER parameter value" and italicise RER
19/ 2.1.5.4.7.1: Change "application service priority" to "Priority Quality-of-Service" and italicise Priority
20/ 2.1.5.4.7.1: Change  "RER Quality of Service Parameter" to "RER Quality-of-Service parameter" and italicise RER
21/ 2.1.6.2.2.1:  Change "application service priority" to "Priority Quality-of-Service parameter of the D-START" and italicise Priority
22/ 2.1.6.2.2.2:  Change "RER Quality of Service Parameter of the D-START" to "RER Quality-of-Service parameter of the D-START for CM" and italicise RER
23/ 2.1.6.2.2.3:  Change as follows:
"The CM-ASE shall map the Class of Communication Service abstract values to the Routing Class abstract value part of the D-START Quality of Service parameter as presented in Table 2.1.6-1." and italicise Quality of Service
24/ Table 2.1.8-3, row XII, List of Predicates column:
Change: CM/ground + UP-FU + FO-FU + MA-FU
Table 2.1.8-3, row XX, Functionality Description column:
Add "," after "functionality"
Table 2.1.8-6, row [CMAircraftMessage]cmContactResponse, column Rcv:
Change: "m" to "M"
25/ 2.1.1:  Change "Introduction" to "INTRODUCTION"
26/ Table 2.1.8-4: under "Functionality Description" column, change "contact, dialogue" to "contact, update, dialogue".
27/ In 2.1.4.2.1, in the comment of the type AEQualifier, change "described in 4" to "described in Sub-Volume 4"
28/ in note of 2.1.3.3.5, change "CM-air-ASE" to "CM-ASE".
29/ In note 4 of 2.1.7.1, change "facility designation primitive" to "facility designation parameter".
30/ In title of table 2.1.8-1, change "CMA" to "CM"
31/ In table 2.1.8-6, 3rd line, change "n/a" to "N/A"

Part 2 (ADS)
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1/ 2.2.1.1.1 Note 1 e) "2.2.1 describes also" should be "2.2.1.5 describes also".
2/ In 2.2.1.3.1.1. note 1, ADS-ASE-xxx-user should be ASE-xxx-user to be consistent with the other references to the users.
3/ A fullstop is missing at the end of 2.2.1.3.2.1 note 5.
4/ in 2.2.1.3.4.7 "this" should be "This"
5/ In 2.2.1.3.5 note, a fullstop is missing.

Part 3 (CPDLC)
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1/ Section 2.3.7.4.2.2. and sub-section 2.3.7.4.2.2.1 and 2.3.7.4.2.2.2 are in the CPDLC-air user section of 2.3.7 and belong in the CPDLC-ground-user section.  This does not change any requirements, but is editorial.
Move section 2.3.7.4.2.2 and its subsections to after 2.3.7.5.2.1.7 and renumber as 2.3.7.5.2.2, 2.3.7.5.2.2.1, and 2.3.7.5.2.2.2.
Note that deletion of section 2.3.7.4.2.2 will cause re-numbering of the current 2.3.7.4.2.3 to 2.3.7.4.2.2 and 2.3.7.4.2.3.1 to 2.3.7.4.2.2.1.
2/ Section 2.3.5. is inconsistent on whether "high priority flight safety message" in the D-START QOS parameter is singular or plural. It should all be plural.  Failure to make this seemingly minor change will result in an ASE rejecting a D-START when it should 
be accepted.

3/  Change section 2.3.5.3.2.1 
From:
Upon receipt of a D-START indication, if the CPDLC-air-ASE is in the IDLE state and the D-START User Data parameter contains a GroundPDUs [UplinkMessage] APDU,and the D-START QOS Priority parameter has the abstract value "high priority flight safety message" and the D-START QOS Residual Error Rate parameter has the abstract value "low", the CPDLC-air-ASE shall:
To:
Upon receipt of a D-START indication, if the CPDLC-air-ASE is in the IDLE state and the D-START User Data parameter contains a GroundPDUs [UplinkMessage] APDU,and the D-START QOS Priority parameter has the abstract value "high priority flight safety messages" and the D-START QOS Residual Error Rate parameter has the abstract value "low", the CPDLC-air-ASE shall:

4/  Change section 2.3.5.4.6.1 
From:
If a D-START indication QOS Priority parameter does not have the abstract value of "high priority flight safety message" or if the QOS Residual Error Rate parameter does not have the abstract value of "low", the CPDLC-air-ASE shall:
To:
If a D-START indication QOS Priority parameter does not have the abstract value of "high priority flight safety messages" or if the QOS Residual Error Rate parameter does not have the abstract value of "low", the CPDLC-air-ASE shall:

5/  Change section 2.3.5.5.2.1
From:
Upon receipt of a D-START indication, if the CPDLC-ground-ASE is in the IDLE state, and the abstract value of the D-START Calling Peer ID parameter is a 24-bit aircraft address, and the D-START User Data parameter contains an AircraftPDUs [StartDownMessage] APDU with the APDU-element mode "cpdlc", and the D-START QOS Priority parameter has the abstract value "high priority flight safety message" and the D-START QOS Residual Error Rate parameter has the abstract value "low", the CPDLC-ground-ASE shall:
To:
Upon receipt of a D-START indication, if the CPDLC-ground-ASE is in the IDLE state, and the abstract value of the D-START Calling Peer ID parameter is a 24-bit aircraft address, and the D-START User Data parameter contains an AircraftPDUs [StartDownMessage] APDU with the APDU-element mode "cpdlc", and the D-START QOS Priority parameter has the abstract value "high priority flight safety messages" and the D-START QOS Residual Error Rate parameter has the abstract value "low", the CPDLC-ground-ASE shall:

6/  Change section 2.3.5.5.2.2 
From:
Upon receipt of a D-START indication, if the CPDLC-ground-ASE is in the IDLE state, and the abstract value of the D-START Calling Peer ID parameter is a 24-bit aircraft address, and the D-START User Data parameter contains an AircraftPDUs [StartDownMessage] APDU with the APDU-element mode "dsc", and the D-START QOS Priority parameter has the abstract value "high priority flight safety message" and the D-START QOS Residual Error Rate parameter has the abstract value "low", the CPDLC-ground-ASE shall:
To:
Upon receipt of a D-START indication, if the CPDLC-ground-ASE is in the IDLE state, and the abstract value of the D-START Calling Peer ID parameter is a 24-bit aircraft address, and the D-START User Data parameter contains an AircraftPDUs [StartDownMessage] APDU with the APDU-element mode "dsc", and the D-START QOS Priority parameter has the abstract value "high priority flight safety messages" and the D-START QOS Residual Error Rate parameter has the abstract value "low", the CPDLC-ground-ASE shall:

7/  Change section 2.3.5.5.2.3
From:
Upon receipt of a D-START indication, if the CPDLC-ground-ASE is in the IDLE state, and the abstract value of the D-START Calling Peer ID parameter is a Facility Designation, and the D-START User Data parameter contains a GroundPDUs [ATCForwardMessage] APDU and the CPDLC-ground-ASE supports the CPDLC-forward service, and the D-START QOS Priority parameter has the abstract value "high priority flight safety message" and the D-START QOS Residual Error Rate parameter has the abstract value "low", the CPDLC-ground-ASE shall:
To:
Upon receipt of a D-START indication, if the CPDLC-ground-ASE is in the IDLE state, and the abstract value of the D-START Calling Peer ID parameter is a Facility Designation, and the D-START User Data parameter contains a GroundPDUs [ATCForwardMessage] APDU and the CPDLC-ground-ASE supports the CPDLC-forward service, and the D-START QOS Priority parameter has the abstract value "high 
priority flight safety messages" and the D-START QOS Residual Error Rate parameter has the abstract value "low", the CPDLC-ground-ASE shall:

8/  Change section 2.3.5.6.6.1
From:
If a D-START indication QOS Priority parameter does not have the abstract value of "high priority flight safety message" or if the QOS Residual Error Rate parameter does not have the abstract value of "low", the CPDLC-ground-ASE shall:
To:
If a D-START indication QOS Priority parameter does not have the abstract value of "high priority flight safety messages" or if the QOS Residual Error Rate parameter does not have the abstract value of "low", the CPDLC-ground-ASE shall:


PArt 4 (FIS-ATIS)
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1/ In section 2.4.4.2.1, in the ASN.1 type "DownlinkAPDU", "Accep t" should be replaced by "Accept".
2/ In the note of section 2.4.3.4.3, "demand contract" should be replaced by "update contract".
3/ In 2.4.5.4.6, a), "invalied" should be replaced by "invalid".
4/ In 2.4.5.3.7.6.2a)2), "FIS Information" should be replaced by "FISInformation". 
5/ In 2.4.5.3.7.8.2b), "FIS ContractNumber" should be replaced by "FISContractNumber".
6/ In 2.4.53.8.8.1b), "FIS ContractNumber" should be replaced by "FISContractNumber".
7/ In 2.4.53.8.8.2a), "FIS ContractNumber" should be replaced by "FISContractNumber".
8/ In 2.4.5.3.11.1, a line should be added between b) and c).
9/ In 2.4.5.3.11.1c), "FIS Service Type" should be replaced by "FISServiceType".
10/ In 2.4.5.3.12.3.1a)1), "CalledPeerId" should be replaced by "Called Peer Id".
11/ In 2.4.5.3.12.3.1a)2)i), "Class Of Communication Service" should be replaced by "ClassOfComunicationService".
12/ In 2.4.5.3.12.7 and 2.4.5.3.12.10, "UserData" should be replaced by "User Data".
13/ In 2.4.5.3.12.8 and 2.4.5.3.12.9, "RejectSource" should be replaced by "Reject Source".
14/ In 2.4.5.4.6.1, "QualityOfService" should be replaced by "Quality Of Service".
15/ In 2.4.7.3.3.3b) and 2.4.7.4.3.3b), "FIS Information" should be replaced by "FISInformation".
16/ In 2.4.5.3.7.8.1c), 2.4.5.3.7.8.2c), 2.4.5.3.7.8.3a), 2.4.5.3.8.8.1a), 2.4.5.3.8.8.1b), 2.4.5.3.8.8.2a), 2.4.5.3.8.8.2b), 2.4.5.3.8.8.3a)
"the value of the FISContractNumber as received in the APDU" should be replaced by "the value of the ContractNumber APDU-element as received in the APDU".
17/ In 2.4.5.3.12.7.1a), "from the FISContractNumber parameter of the APDU" should be replaced by "from the ContractNumber APDU-element of the received APDU".
18/ In 2.4.5.3.12.10.1a)3), "based on the FISContractNumber parameter of the APDU" should be replaced by "based on the ContractNumber APDU-element of the received APDU".
19/ In 2.4.5.4.5.1, "the FISContractNumber in the decoded APDU" should be replaced by "the ContractNumber APDU-element in the decoded APDU".
20/ In 2.4.4.2.1, "DownlinkAPDU::=", UplinkAPDU::=", "FISAcceptData::=", "FISCancelAcceptData::=", "FISRejectReason ::=ENUMERATED", "FISProtocolErrorDiag ::=ENUMERATED", "FISServiceType ::=ENUMERATED", "ArrivalDepartureIndicator ::=ENUMERATED", "BrakingActionQuality ::=ENUMERATED", "CloudAmount ::=ENUMERATED", "CloudType ::=ENUMERATED", "RunwayLetter ::=ENUMERATED" and "VisibilityDirection ::=ENUMERATED" should be replaced by 
"DownlinkAPDU ::=", "UplinkAPDU ::=", "FISAcceptData ::=", "FISCancelAcceptData ::=", "FISRejectReason ::= ENUMERATED", "FISProtocolErrorDiag ::= ENUMERATED", "FISServiceType ::= ENUMERATED", "ArrivalDepartureIndicator ::= ENUMERATED", "BrakingActionQuality ::= ENUMERATED", "CloudAmount ::= ENUMERATED", "CloudType ::= ENUMERATED", "RunwayLetter ::= ENUMERATED" and "VisibilityDirection ::= ENUMERATED".
21/ In 2.4.4.2.1, in the definition of the type VisibilityValue, "nautMiles VisibilityNautMiles" should be replaced by "nautMiles [2] VisibilityNautMiles".
22/ In 2.4.1.1.5, Note b)8), replace "acknowlegement" by "acknowledgement".
23/ Table 2.4.8-4, entry "FIS-cancel-contracts", replace "m" by "M".
24/ Table 2.4.8-5, entry "[FISUplinkAPDU]fISReport", replace "m" by "M".
25/ In 2.4.3.4.8.2, replace "This" by "The".
26/ In 2.4, replace "FIS" by "Flight Information Services"
27/ In 2.4.4.2.1, in the types "FISAbort", "FISCancelAcceptData", "FISCancelUpdateData", "FISRequestData" and "FISServiceType", delete the word "Request" after (ATIS)
28/ change 2.4.2.1 "Backwards Compatibility Requirements" to "FIS ASE Version Number"

Assigned SME: 				Sub-Volume II SME

Proposed SARPs amendment: 

See above.

SME Recommendation to CCB: 		-

CCB Decision:				atnp_ccb_chair: ACCEPTED (20/10/97)
					CCB-3: RESOLVED