Title: ADS - Editorial errors
     
PDR Reference:                    		98030004 
Originator Reference:				editoads
SARPs Document Reference:          		ADS SARPs, see text
Status:                          		RESOLVED
Impact :						D (Minor)
PDR Revision Date:               		17/08/98 (FORWARDED -> RESOLVED)
							20/05/98 (items 9 and 10 revisited, 
									items 11 to 13 added)
							13/03/98 (SUBMITTED->FORWARDED)
PDR Submission Date:				13/03/98
Submitting State/Organization:  		CENA - DGAC 
Submitting Author Name:           		Jean, M
Submitting Author E-mail Address:		jean@cenatls.cena.dgac.fr
Submitting Author Supplemental
Contact Information:
SARPs Date:                 		    	IV2.2, March 98 
SARPs Language:                    		English
     
Summary of Defect:

1/ Table 2.2.1.5-1 - cell (t-EM-2,timer stop event) 
change ADS-modify-emergency-contract request to ADS-modify-emergency-contract confirmation.

2/ Change 2.2.1.5.3.8.8 from
"Upon receipt of an ADS-negative-acknowledgement-PDU" to
"Upon receipt of an ADS-negative-acknowledgement-PDU for an event contract".

3/ Change 2.2.1.5.3.10.9 from
"Upon receipt of an ADS-negative-acknowledgement-PDU" to
"Upon receipt of an ADS-negative-acknowledgement-PDU for a periodic contract".

4/ In 2.2.1.5.3.9.5, "positive acknowledgement" shall be in italics.

5/  In 2.2.1.5.3.10.4.1 b), change "ADS-cancel-PDU" to "ADS-cancel-contract-PDU".

6/ In 2.2.1.5.3.15.5.1, there is no reason to start the t-LI-1 timer. Remove item b) and add the word "and" at the end of item a).

7/ In 2.2.1.5.3.15.4.1 a), change "with PDU in the user data" to "with the PDU in the user data".

8/ Table 2.2.1.5-62, the lines ADS-negative-acknowledgement-PDU/cancel-event-contract and cancel-periodic-contract should be removed. 

9/ In table 2.2.1.5-73, 
. add "start t-LI-1" to cell (ADS-cancel-all-contracts request,LI-G-ACTIVE) to be in line with section 2.2.1.5.3.15.3.1b),
. add "stop t-LI-1" and "ADS-cancel-all-contracts cnf" to cell (D-END cnf, LI-G-END),
. add another row for timer expiry for t-LI-1. It should abort the connection under LI-G-END.

10/ This issue is now covered by PDR 98050018.

11/ In the following paragraphs, change "aircraft identifier" to "aircraft address":

2.2.1.3.4.1, Table 2.2.1.3-1
2.2.1.3.4.2, Table 2.2.1.3-2
2.2.1.3.4.3
2.2.1.3.4.3.1
2.2.1.3.5.1, Table 2.2.1.3-3
2.2.1.3.5.2, Table 2.2.1.3-4
2.2.1.3.5.3
2.2.1.3.5.3.1
2.2.1.3.6.1, Table 2.2.1.3-5
2.2.1.3.6.2, Table 2.2.1.3-6
2.2.1.3.6.3
2.2.1.3.6.3.1
2.2.1.5.3.6.2.1
2.2.1.5.3.8.2.1
2.2.1.5.3.10.3.1
2.2.1.5.3.10.3.2 (superseeded by PDR 98050005)
2.2.1.5.3.1.5.2.1, Table 2.2.1.5-61

12/ In the following paragraphs, change "aircraft-id" to "aircraft address":

2.2.1.3.4.3.1
2.2.1.3.5.3.1
2.2.1.3.6.3.1

13/ Note 2 under 2.2.1.7.7.2.1 is in the wrong position. Move note 2 under 2.2.1.7.2.1 to a position under 2.2.1.7.7.1.

14/ Change the 13 sub-paragraphs under section 2.2.1.7.3.5 that start "Subject to the restrictions stated in 2.2.1.7.1.5.5," by "Subject to the restrictions stated in 2.2.1.7.1.5.5, when". 


Assigned SME:                    		Sub-Volume II SME

Proposed SARPs amendment:

SME Recommendation to CCB:          	
     
CCB Decision:                    		CCB-5 (Rio): FORWARDED
 							Atnp_ccb_chair : RESOLVED (1)

(1) CCB agreed that this PDR should be upgraded to RESOLVED status and should appear as part of the first annual amendment to Doc 9705. FORWARDED status is not appropriate since it indicates a PDR which has been referred to an ATNP WG for addition to its work program, i.e. a enhancement or major change to the baseline.