Title: ICAO 2.2 - Engineering Version Discrepancies and Editorial Errors PDR Reference: 98040005 Originator Reference: Ed22review SARPs Document Reference: All SARPs sub-volumes, see text Status: ADOPTED PDR Revision Date: 17/08/98 (errors corrected in CM 1/, ADS 5/ 07/07/98 (AIDC items 28 to 50 added) 11/05/98 (SUBMITTED->RESOLVED) PDR Submission Date: 29/04/98 Submitting State/Organization: OACI, Secretariat via Steve Van Trees (Rio) and all SARPs editors Submitting Author Name: Submitting Author E-mail Address: Submitting Author Supplemental Contact Information: SARPs Date: IV2.2, Rio SARPs Language: English Summary of Defect: Sub-Volume I ----------------- 1/ 1.2 b) needed the hard return inserted before c). Sub-Volume II ------------------ == Part 1 (CM) =========== 1/ Section 2.1.3.5.1: change "as presented Table 2.1.3-4" to "as presented in Table 2.1.3-4" 2/ Section 2.1.4.2.1, in the ASN.1 definition of "Date": change "- use of the Date field" to "-- use of the Date field" == Part 2 (ADS) ============ 0/ Remove empty section 2.2.1.3.4.8 1/ Note of section 2.2.1.3.5.7: change "charcter" to "character" 2/ Section 2.2.1.3.11.2: change "2.2..1.3-12" to "2.2.1.3-12" 3/ Section 2.2.1.5.3.6.2.1: change "derieved" to "derived" 4/ Section 2.2.1.7.1.5.5 a) 1): change ";" to ", and" 5/ Section 2.2.1.7.1.5.5 a) 2): change "size." to "value, and" 6/ Section 2.2.1.7.4.2.2: change "then" to "then:" 7/ Section 2.2.1.7.4.2.2.2 b): change "exists,send" to "exists, send" 8/ Section 2.2.1.7.4.4.5: in a) change "indication, and" to "indication;" in b) change "element, and" to "element; and" in c) change "parameter" to "parameter." 9/ Section 2.2.1.7.6.3.5 a): change "fom" to "fom; and" 10/ Section 2.2.1.7.6.3.5 b): change "flight-id" to "aircraft address" 11/ Section 2.2.1.7.6.3.7 b): change "response;" to "response; and" 12/ Section 2.2.1.7.7.1 a): change "parameter, and" to "parameter; and" 13/ Section 2.2.1.7.7.1.1: change "seconds" to "seconds." 14/ Note 2 of section 2.2.1.7.7.2.1: spell "2nd" and "3rd" 15/ Note of 2.2.1.8.1.1 in a), change "required," to "required;" in b), change "protocol," to "protocol;" in c), change "applicable, and" to "applicable; and" 16/ Section 2.2.2.5.4.6.1 b): change "invoke ADS-provider-abort indication" by "if not in the ADS-R-IDLE state, invoke ADS-provider-abort indication". 17/ Delete section 2.2.2.5.4.7.1 b) == Part 3 (CPDLC) ============== 1/ Section 2.3.7.4.3.1.3 in a), change "Check" to "check" in b), change "If" to "if" and ", and" to "; and" == Part 4 (FIS) ============ 1/ Section 2.4.5.3.6.7: change "on a request" to "of a request" 2/ Section 2.4.5.3.8.5.1: add a line between a)3) and b) 3/ Section 2.4.5.3.10.3: add a line between 2.4.5.3.10.2c) and 2.4.5.3.10.3 4/ Section 2.4.5.3.12.15: add a line between a) and b) 5/ Section 2.4.5.3.12.17.1: move to top of next page 6/ In Table 2.4.5-1, in cell (FIS-update-contract, t-UC-1,Timer value) replace "9 min" by "6 min" 7/ In Table 2.4.5-1, in cell (FIS-update-contract, t-UC-2,Timer value) replace "6 min" by "9 min" 8/ Renumber section 2.4.6.2.2.1.1 as section 2.4.6.2.2.2 9/ Renumber section 2.4.6.2.2.1.2 as section 2.4.6.2.2.3 10/ Section 2.4.5.3.12.13.1 a), change "dialogue-end-not-accepted" by "dialogue-end-not-supported". 11/ In Table 2.4.5-10/b, cell (D-END cnf negative, LI-END-I), change "dialogue-end-not-accepted" by "dialogue-end-not-supported". Sub-Volume III ------------------- == Part 1 (AMHS) ============== (no change) == Part 2 (AIDC) ============= 1) Section 3.2.3.1.1.1: Italicised the words "Called ICAO Facility Designation" 2) Section 3.2.3.1.1.2: Italicised the words "Called ICAO Facility Designation" 3) Section 3.2.3.8.1.4.1: Correct the words "noregime" to read "no regime" 4) Section 3.2.4.1.1.1: Italicised "n)" and "v)" 5) Section 3.2.4.2.18.2: Delete the dot after the word "Primitive" 6) Section 3.2.5.3.1.15: Correct the word "rimitive" to read "Primitive" 7) Section 3.2.5.3.3.2.2.1 a) 1) i): Correct the word "ro" to read "to" 8) Section 3.2.5.3.3.2.2.1 a) 1) ii): Correct the word "prameter" to read "parameter" 9) Section 3.2.6.1.6.2.1 c): Correct the word "runining" to read "running" 10) Section Table 3.2.6-1: In the header row, correct the word "Pimitive" to read "Primitive" 11) Table 3.2.6-1: Correct the word "Reigme" to read "Regime" 12) Table 3.2.6-1: Correct the word "Complementry" to read "Complementary" (several occurences) 13) Section 3.2.6.1.31.2.1: Correct the expression "AIDC-info-tfr-apdu" to read "AIDC-inf-tfr-apdu" 14) Section 3.2.6.4.3 Note 3: Correct the word "preceeding" to read "preceding" 15) Section 3.2.6.4.3: After Note 3, insert before the table the following title: "Table 3.2.6-2: State Table" 16) Section 3.2.6.4.3: In this table, correct the word "assum" to read "assm" (several occurences) 17) Section 3.2.6.4.3: In this table, correct the word "NEGOCIATING" to read "NEGOTIATING" 18) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "AIDC MESSAGE ELEMENTS" section, it is suggested that the definitions be arranged in alphabetical order of the elements defined to ease referencing. 19) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "AIDC-nfy-apdu" sequence, delete one tab space between "callingICAOFacilityDesignation" and "[1]" 20) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "Notify" sequence, delete one tab space between "CNSEquipment" and "OPTIONAL" 21) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "CoordinateInitial" sequence, delete one tab space between "CNSEquipment" and "OPTIONAL" 22) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "NumberOfAircraft" definition, delete one tab space between "=3D" and "INTEGER" 23) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "TrackData" definition, delete one tab space between "trueTrackAngle" and "[4]" 24) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "ErrorCode" definition, correct "invalidLevelMeters" to read "invalidLevelMetre" 25) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "ErrorCode" definition, correct "invalidAirframeID" to read "invalidAircraftAddress" 26) Section 3.2.7.1.1: In the "ErrorCode" definition, correct "invalidDistanceKm" to read "invalidDistancekm" 27) Replace the word "an" by "a" after the words "Upon the receipt of" in sections: 3.2.5.3.5.1.2.1, 3.2.5.3.5.2.2.1 (also mentioned in PDR 98030003 under discussion by the SME32 Team), 3.2.5.3.5.3.2.1, 3.2.5.3.6.1.2.1, 3.2.5.3.6.2.2.1, 3.2.5.3.6.3.2.1, 3.2.5.3.6.4.2.1, 3.2.5.3.6.5.2.1 28) 3.2.5.3.1.16.2.1 item c), replace 5.3.1.1 with 3.2.5.3.1.1 29) 3.2.5.3.1.18.2.2, delete the word "either" 30) 3.2.6.1.9.2.1, item d) 2), put the word accept between quotes 31) 3.2.6.1.9.2.1, item d) 3), put the word reject between quotes 32) 3.2.6.1.10.2.1, item f) 2), put the word accept between quotes 33) 3.2.6.1.10.2.1, item f) 2), in variable name vre the characters "re" should be normal text, not subscript 34) 3.2.6.1.10.2.1, item g), in variable name vs1 the character "s" should be normal text, not subscript 35) replace "Req" with "req" in "AIDC-tfr-cntrl-Req-apdu" (5 times) in: 3.2.6.1.27.2.1 item a), 3.2.6.1.27.2.1 item b), 3.2.6.1.28, 3.2.6.1.28.2.1, 3.2.6.1.28.2.1 item a) 36) replace "trn-start" with "trns-start" in: 3.2.6.1.27.2.1 item f), 3.2.6.1.28.2.1 item f) 37) replace "Rsp" with "rsp" in "AIDC-tfr-cntrl-Rsp-apdu" (5 times) in: 3.2.6.1.29.2.1 item a), 3.2.6.1.29.2.1 item b), 3.2.6.1.30, 3.2.6.1.30.2.1, 3.2.6.1.30.2.1 item a) 38) 3.2.6.1.31.1.1, append the words "or the RE-NEGOTIATING state, or the BACKWARD COORDINATING state" to the end of the clause. 39) 3.2.6.1.32.1.1, append the words "or the RE-NEGOTIATING state, or the BACKWARD COORDINATING state" to the end of the clause. 40) 3.2.6.1.33.1.1, replace the words "BACKWARD COORDINATED" with "BACKWARD COORDINATING". 41) 3.2.6.1.33.1.1 insert the words "or the RE-NEGOTIATING state," in the clause. 42) 3.2.6.1.33.2.1 item b) 2) i), C), in variable name vr1 the character, "r" should be normal text, not subscript 43) 3.2.6.1.33.2.1 item b) 2) ii), delete the words "the or" 44) 3.2.6.1.33.2.1 item b) 2) iii) A) I) (b), in variable name vre the characters "re" should be normal text, not subscript 45) 3.2.6.1.33.2.1 item b) 2) v) B), in timer name ts the character "s" should be upper case and subscript, not lower case and normal text 46) 3.2.6.1.34.1.1, append the words "or the RE-NEGOTIATING state, or the BACKWARD COORDINATING state" to the end of the clause. 47) 3.2.6.1.37.1.1 insert the words "or the RE-NEGOTIATING state," in the clause. 48) 3.2.6.1.38.1.1 insert the words "or the RE-NEGOTIATING state," in the clause. 49) 3.2.6.1.39.1.1 insert the words "or the RE-NEGOTIATING state," in the clause. 50) 3.2.6.4.1, replace the words <> with <> Sub-Volume IV ------------------- 1/ Figure 4.1-3 is on SV4 page 5. Figure 4.1-4 is on page 6. The figure shapes are exactly the same. The boxes are labelled differently as follows: 4.1-3 4.1-4 AE ATN-App AE ASE ACSE (left middle) ASO/ASE ATN-App ASE ASE Future ASE (lower right) CF CF Sub-Volume V ------------------ None. Assigned SME: All SMEs Proposed SARPs amendment: See "Summary of Defect". SME Recommendation to CCB: ACCEPTED CCB Decision: SUBMITTED (29/04/98): atnp_ccb_chair ccb_chair (11/05/98): RESOLVED