Title: ICAO 9705 Edition 1 Editorial Errors PDR Reference: 99010004 Originator Reference: - SARPs Document Reference: All SARPs sub-volumes, see text Status: RESOLVED Impact: B (Bug) PDR Revision Date: 12/11/99 (move items V-25 to V-38 from 99070001 see mails at the end of the PDR) 29/09/99 (add items V-24, II2-38 to 41, II4-4 to 6, V-24) see note below. 04/06/99 (add items 42 & 43) 21/05/99 (ACCEPTED -> RESOLVED) 11/02/99 PDR Submission Date: 18/01/99 Submitting State/Organization: CCB Submitting Author Name: CCB Chair Submitting Author E-mail Address: atnp_ccb_chair@cenatls.cena.dgac.fr Submitting Author Supplemental Contact Information: SARPs Date: ICAO 9705 Edition 1 (IV 2.3), 06/11/98 SARPs Language: English Summary of Defect: Note from M. Paydar (at Gran Canaria meeting): The Editorial Section of the ICAO Secretariat has carried out an overall examination of the Second Edition of Doc 9705 before sending it for printing. They found a number of problems and suggested appropriate solutions as listed below. Sub-Volume I ----------------- (no change) Sub-Volume II ------------------ == Part 1 (CM) =========== 1/ In section 2.1.5.1.1 Note 4, remove "See 4.3.3". 2/ In section 2.1.5.3.2 Note 2 a) 2), change "Req" to "Ind" == Part 2 (ADS) ============ 1/ In section 2.2.1.7.3.4, set in italics "event-ncn" 2/ In section 2.2.1.7.3.5 b), set in italics "event-report" and "baseline". 3/ In section 2.2.1.7.3.5.14 Note 2, change "in 2.2.1." to "in 2.2.1.7.3.3". 4/ In section 2.2.1.7.4.1, set in italics the first occurrence of "reason", set in normal font the second occurrence. 5/ In section 2.2.1.7.4.1 Note, change "in place" to "in place.". 6/ In Table 2.2.1.7-1, replace "short-term-intent" in the column (Modulus in the Contract Details Parameter" by "short-term-intent-modulus". 7/ In 2.2.1.7.7.1 a), set in italics "reporting interval". 8/ In 2.2.1.7.7.1.1, change "the" to "The". 9/ In 2.2.1.7.7.2.1, change "the" to "The". 10/ In 2.2.1.7.9 Note 2, replace "or and" by "or an". 11/ In section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 4 b)5) replace "message" by "contract". 12/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 5 a) 6). 13/ In section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 5 b)2) replace "demand" by "demand contract". 14/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 5 b) 6). 15/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 6 b) 3). 16/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 7 a) 1). 17/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.2.1.1. 18/ In section 2.2.2.1.1 Note 2 a) replace "scope of 2" by "scope of 2.2.2". 19/ In section 2.2.2.3.2 Note, remove "and air based". 20/ In section 2.2.2.3.8.2, add "Note.-" in front of the note. 21/ In section 2.2.2.5.2.1, replace "ADS-ASE" by "ADS-RF-ASE". 22/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.3.2.1 Note 5. 23/ In section 2.2.1.3.4.7 Note, replace "this" by "This". 24/ In section 2.2.1.3.5 Note, replace "aircraft It is" by "aircraft. It is". 25/ In section 2.2.1.3.5.6.1 b), set in italics "event-ncn". 26/ In section 2.2.1.3.7.3.1, set in italics "event-contract". 27/ In section 2.2.1.3.7.4.1, set in italics "NULL". 28/ In section 2.2.1.3.13 Note, remove ", or and ADS-ground-user to abort an ADS forward contract with a particular ground system". 29/ In section 2.2.1.3.14 Note, remove "or a particular ADS-ground-user - ADS-ground-user pairing". 30/ In section 2.2.1.4.2.1, replace "882" by "8824". 31/ (Deleted) 32/ In section 2.2.2.5.1.1 Note 3, remove "(see 4.3.3.1.2.4)" 33/ In sections 2.2.2.5.4.1.1 a), 2.2.2.5.4.3.1 a), 2.2.2.5.4.4.1 a), change Originator parameter to parameter. 34/ In section 2.2.2.5.4.7.1 a) set Originator, user data and invalid-qos-parameter in italics. 35/ In Table 2.2.2.5-18, replace aDS-provider-abort-PDU with value communications-service-failure to "communications-service-failure" 36/ In section 2.2.2.5.3.5.3.2 change "it shall" by "the responding ADS-RF-ASE shall" 37/ In section 2.2.1.3.14.2.1, set "in italics Reason" 38/ para 2.2.1.5.1.1, Figure 2.2.5.1.-1 should be renumbered as Figure 2.2.1.5-1; Similarly, Figure 2.2.1.5.25 should be called Figure 2.2.1.5-25; 39/ para 2.2.1.5.3.1.1, Note 1, reference to Figures 2.2.1.5-34 and 35 should be changed to Figures 2.2.1.5-36 and 37; Accordingly, the actual figure numbers should be changed too. 40/ para 2.2.1.5.5.1 (re State Tables), numbers of Tables 2.2.1.5.70, 71, 72 and 74 should be corected to 2.2.1.5-70, 71, 72 and 74; 41/ para 2.2.2.8.1, number of Table 2.2.1.8-3 should be changed to 2.2.2.8-3; == Part 3 (CPDLC) ============== 1/ [CCB - 97050019 6/] In section 2.3.5.6.6.1 replace "CPDLC-air-ASE" by "CPDLC-ground-ASE". 2/ (invalidated by PDR 98120009/12) In note 3 of section 2.3.3.3.7, replace: ."to to" by "to", ."whta" by "what" ."dialogue provider service" by "dialogue service provider" 3/ (invalidated by PDR 98120009/12)In note 3 of section 2.3.3.4.7, replace: ."dialogue provider service" by "dialogue service provider" 4/ In note 2 of section 2.3.3.4.7, replace: . "CPDLC dialogue" by "DSC dialogue" 5/ In section 2.3.7.2.2 Note 2, replace "ground system another aircraft" by "ground system with another aircraft". 6/ In section 2.3.7.2.2 Note 4, replace "by a the CPDLC" by "by a CPDLC" 7/ In section 2.3.7.3.11.5.1, replace "eith" by "with" 8/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.1 note 4, replace "paramter" by "parameter" 9/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.1 note 5, replace "paramter" by "parameter", "these SARPs" by "section 2.3.7" and "give" by "gives" 10/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.1 note 6, replace "CPDLC-end-service" by "CPDLC-end service" 11/ Section 2.3.7.4.2.2.1 a), replace "paramter" by "parameter". 12/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.9, set "Result" in italics. 13/ In section 2.3.7.4.5.1.2, replace "the air-user" by "the CPDLC-air-user". 14/ In section 2.3.7.5.1.2.5, replace "CPDLC-response" by "CPDLC-start response" 15/ In section 2.3.7.5.1.2.6, replace "CPDLC-response" by "CPDLC-start response" 16/ In section 2.3.7.5.1.2.7, replace "If CPDLC-start indication" by "If a CPDLC-start indication". 17/ Section 2.3.7.5.4.1 note 5, "these SARPs" by "section 2.3.7" and "give" by "gives" 18/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1 note 6, "DSC-end-service" by "DSC-end service" 19/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1.2.1, replace "accepted. by "accepted". 20/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1.3.1, replace "accepted. by "accepted". 21/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1.4.2 b), replace "rejected. by "rejected". 22/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1.5.2 d) 2), replace "rejected. by "rejected". 23/ In section 2.3.7.1 Note 5, replace "in the in the" by "in the". 24/ In section 2.3.7.2.1.6 a), replace "aircraft identification" to "aircraft flight identification". 25/ In section 2.3.5.1.1. Note 3, remove "See 4.4.3.". 26/ In section 2.3.7.3.11.2.1, set "CPDLC Message" in italics. 27/ In section 2.3.7.3.11.8.3, replace "LOGICAL, ACKNOWLEDGMENT" by "LOGICAL ACKNOWLEDGEMENT". 28/ In section 2.3.7.4.1.2.2, replace by " parameter". 29/ In sections 2.3.7.4.1.2.4, 2.3.7.4.1.2.5, 2.3.7.4.1.2.6, 2.3.7.4.1.2.7, replace "CPDLC-response" by "CPDLC-start response". 30/ In sections 2.3.7.4.1.2.7 c) and 2.3.7.4.1.3.1 c), replace "CPDLC-start indication" by "in the CPDLC-start request". 31/ In section 2.3.7.4.1.2.8, replace "If CPDLC-start" by "If a CPDLC-start". 32/ In section 2.3.7.4.2.2.1, replace "in DSC-start" by "in the DSC-start". 33/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.1 note 2, replace "CPDLC-end-confirmation" by "CPDLC-end confirmation". 34/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.9, replace "invoking CPDLC-end" by "invoking a CPDLC-end". 35/ In sections 2.3.7.4.6.2.1 b) and 2.3.7.4.6.3.1 b) replace "current-data authority-abort" by "current-data-authority-abort". 36/ In section 2.3.7.5.3.1.2, replace the "ground-user" by "CPDLC-ground-user". 37/ in section 2.3.7.3.5.1, replace "CPDLC-user" by "CPDLC-air-user". 38/ in section 2.3.7.3.6.1, replace "CPDLC-user" by "CPDLC-ground-user". 39/ In section 2.3.7.4.1.2.1, replace "CPDLC-user" by "CPDLC-air-user". 40/ Add section 2.3.7.5.1.2.8 as follows: Upon receipt of a CPDLC-start service indication, the CPDLC-ground-user shall invoke a CPDLC-start service response within 0.5 seconds. 41/ In Section 2.3.4.2.1, in the ASN.1 comment to the definition Frequencyvhf, change 118.0000 to 118.000 42/ In section 2.3.4.2.1, in the ASN.1 definition of UM215, replace "uM215 DirectionDegrees" by "uM215DirectionDegrees" 43/ In section 2.3.4.2.1, in the ASN.1 definition of DM113, replace "SpeedTypeSpeedTypeSpeedType Speed" by "SpeedTypeSpeedTypeSpeedTypeSpeed" == Part 4 (FIS) ============ 1/ In section 2.4.5.1.1 Note 3, remove "(see 4.3.3).". 2/ In section 2.4.7.4 Note 4, replace "the FIS-demand-contract" by "the FIS-update-contract" 3/ In section 2.4.7.4.2, replace "the FIS-demand-contract" by "the FIS-update-contract" 4/ para 2.4.5.3.1, Note 1, the reference to Figure 2.4.5-18 should be changed to Figure 2.4.5-19; Accordingly, the number of Figure 2.4.5-18 should be corrected as well. 5/ para 2.4.5.5.1, the number of Figure 2.4.5-19 should be changed to 2.4.5-20; 6/ para 2.4.5.5.1, there is no Figure 2.3.5-5! either it should be reinserted or all tables starting from 2.4.6-a should be renumbered accordingly. Sub-Volume III ------------------- == Part 1 (AMHS) ============== (no change) == Part 2 (AIDC) ============= (no change) Sub-Volume IV ------------------- (no change) Sub-Volume V ------------------ 1/ Section 5.3.2.2.2.1, item a) and b) Increase indent of items a) and b) and of the subsequent line containing the single word "or" 2/ Section 5.3.5.2.13.7, item b) Replace "loc-RIB" by "Loc-RIB" 3/ Section 5.3.5.2.13.8, item b) Delete full stop following 5.3.5.2.12.2 4/ Section 5.3.5.2.13.8, item c) Delete full stop following 5.3.5.2.12.3 5/ Section 5.3.5.2.13.8, item c) Replace "loc-RIB" by "Loc-RIB" 6/ Table in Section 5.3.5.2.14.1 a) 7th line (Item = noIDRP-a): Replace in the column ATN SARPs Reference "5.3.2.12.3" by "5.3.5.2.12.3" b) 8th line (Item = noIDRP-ag): Replace in the column ATN SARPs Reference "5.3.2.12.2" by "5.3.5.2.12.2" c) 9th line (Item = lvSubnet): Replace in the column ATN SARPs Reference "5.3.2.13" by "5.3.5.2.13" 7/ Table in Section 5.3.5.2.14.2 8th line (Item = initIDRP-ar): Replace in the column ATN SARPs Reference "5.3.2.10" by "5.3.5.2.10" 8/ Section 5.6.3.1 Delete full stop at the end of the line 9/ Table in Section 5.6.4.4 22nd line (Item = ePRI-s): Replace "ePRI-s" by "ePri-s" in the first column 10/ Table in Section 5.6.4.4 23rd line (Item = ePRI-r): a) Replace "ePRI-r" by "ePri-r" in the first column b) Align reference number with left side of box in 3rd column 11/ Table in Section 5.6.4.6 19th line (Item = edPri-s): Replace "ePRI-s:M" by "ePri-s:M" in the columns Status and ATN Support 12/ Table in Section 5.6.4.6 20th line (Item = edPri-r): Replace "ePRI-r:M" by "ePri-r:M" in the columns Status and ATN Support 13/ Table in Section 5.6.4.9 13th line (Item = eqPRR-s): Replace "ePrr-s:M" by "ePRR-s:M" in the columns Status and ATN Support 14/ Table in Section 5.6.4.9 14th line (Item = eqPRR-r): Replace "ePrr-r:M" by "ePRR-r:M" in the columns Status and ATN Support 15/ Table in Section 5.6.4.10 13th line (Item = epPRR-s): Replace "ePr-s:M" by "ePRR-s:M" in the column Status and "ePrr-s:M" by "ePRR-s:M" in the column ATN Support 16/ Table in Section 5.6.4.10 14th line (Item = epPRR-r): Replace "ePr-r:M" by "ePRR-r:M" in the column Status and "ePrr-r:M" by "ePRR-r:M" in the column ATN Support 17) Table in Section 5.6.4.14 22nd line (Item = idPri-r): Replace "iPRi:M" by "iPri:M" in the column Status 18/ Table in Section 5.6.4.16 22nd line (Item = iqPri-r): Replace "iPRi:M" by "iPri:M" in the column Status 19/ Table in Section 5.6.4.17 22nd line (Item = ipPri-r): Replace "iPRi:M" by "iPri:M" in the column Status 20/ Section 5.7.6.3.4.1.1, item g) Add paragraph break after ".. generated." Edit font of sentence starting with "Table 5.7-6 Mapping ." to become table heading 21/ Section 5.7.6.5.2.2, item a) Change font size of text 22/ Section 5.7.6.5.7.1.1 Change "Figure 5.7-10" to "Figure 5.7-9" 23/ Table 5.8-5 2nd line: Replace "KBits/sec" by "Kbits/sec" 24/ Para 5.8.2.2.1, Notes 3 and 4 should be renumbered as Notes 1 and 2. 25/ Para 5.2.7.1.3, Note 1 refers to Table 1.2-1. The reference should be changed to Table 1-1. 26/ Para 5.2.8.1.1 refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 27/ Para 5.2.8.1.2, bullets a) and b) refer to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 28/ Para 5.2.8.2.2 refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 29/ Para 5.2.8.3.1 refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 30/ Para 5.3.5.2.13.8 refers to 5.3.3.2.13.6. It should refer to 5.3.5.2.13.6. 31/Para 5.5.1.2, Note 1, bullet d) refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 32/ Para 5.5.1.2, Note 3 refers to Table 1.2-1. The reference should be changed to Table 1-1. 33/ Para 5.5.2.3.1.5 refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 34/ Para 5.5.2.6.1.4.2.2 refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 35/ Para 5.5.2.6.1.4.2.3, Note refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 36/ Para 5.5.3.5.1.4.2.1 refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 37/ Para 5.5.3.5.2.1.1 refers to Table 1.2-2. The reference should be changed to Table 1-2. 38/ Para 5.8.2.2.1, Notes 3 and 4 should be renumbered as Notes 1 and 2. Assigned SME: All SMEs Proposed SARPs amendment: See "Summary of Defect". SME Recommendation to CCB: - CCB Decision: CCB-8 (Honolulu): SUBMITTED (18/01/99) CCB-8 (Honolulu): ACCEPTED (18/01/99) CCB-9 (Naples): RESOLVED (21/01/99) > Frederic, The small errors in SV5 (the priority table references) were actually caught in time to have corrections included in the present printed ICAO edition 2. So, my thought is the two items we looked at in Las Palmas (the ICAO SV2 questions, and the Dr. Ching SV5 questions)actually belong in 99010004, not 99070001. Steve > Steve, > it was my proposal to include these issues in PDR 99070001, as I thought that these changes should be documented and I didn't find a better home for them. PDR 99010004 is actually closed, but if you like to re-open it, then the SV5 items 13 through 25 and item 30 of PDR 99070001 have to be moved to it. Klaus-Peter