Title: ICAO 9705 Edition 1 Editorial Errors PDR Reference: 99010004 Originator Reference: - SARPs Document Reference: All SARPs sub-volumes, see text Status: RESOLVED PDR Revision Date: 04/06/99 (add items 42 & 43) 21/05/99 (ACCEPTED -> RESOLVED) 11/02/99 PDR Submission Date: 18/01/99 Submitting State/Organization: CCB Submitting Author Name: CCB Chair Submitting Author E-mail Address: atnp_ccb_chair@cenatls.cena.dgac.fr Submitting Author Supplemental Contact Information: SARPs Date: ICAO 9705 Edition 1 (IV 2.3), 06/11/98 SARPs Language: English Summary of Defect: Sub-Volume I ----------------- (no change) Sub-Volume II ------------------ == Part 1 (CM) =========== 1/ In section 2.1.5.1.1 Note 4, remove "See 4.3.3". 2/ In section 2.1.5.3.2 Note 2 a) 2), change "Req" to "Ind" == Part 2 (ADS) ============ 1/ In section 2.2.1.7.3.4, set in italics "event-ncn" 2/ In section 2.2.1.7.3.5 b), set in italics "event-report" and "baseline". 3/ In section 2.2.1.7.3.5.14 Note 2, change "in 2.2.1." to "in 2.2.1.7.3.3". 4/ In section 2.2.1.7.4.1, set in italics the first occurrence of "reason", set in normal font the second occurrence. 5/ In section 2.2.1.7.4.1 Note, change "in place" to "in place.". 6/ In Table 2.2.1.7-1, replace "short-term-intent" in the column (Modulus in the Contract Details Parameter" by "short-term-intent-modulus". 7/ In 2.2.1.7.7.1 a), set in italics "reporting interval". 8/ In 2.2.1.7.7.1.1, change "the" to "The". 9/ In 2.2.1.7.7.2.1, change "the" to "The". 10/ In 2.2.1.7.9 Note 2, replace "or and" by "or an". 11/ In section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 4 b)5) replace "message" by "contract". 12/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 5 a) 6). 13/ In section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 5 b)2) replace "demand" by "demand contract". 14/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 5 b) 6). 15/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 6 b) 3). 16/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.1.1 Note 7 a) 1). 17/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.2.1.1. 18/ In section 2.2.2.1.1 Note 2 a) replace "scope of 2" by "scope of 2.2.2". 19/ In section 2.2.2.3.2 Note, remove "and air based". 20/ In section 2.2.2.3.8.2, add "Note.-" in front of the note. 21/ In section 2.2.2.5.2.1, replace "ADS-ASE" by "ADS-RF-ASE". 22/ Add a fullstop to section 2.2.1.3.2.1 Note 5. 23/ In section 2.2.1.3.4.7 Note, replace "this" by "This". 24/ In section 2.2.1.3.5 Note, replace "aircraft It is" by "aircraft. It is". 25/ In section 2.2.1.3.5.6.1 b), set in italics "event-ncn". 26/ In section 2.2.1.3.7.3.1, set in italics "event-contract". 27/ In section 2.2.1.3.7.4.1, set in italics "NULL". 28/ In section 2.2.1.3.13 Note, remove ", or and ADS-ground-user to abort an ADS forward contract with a particular ground system". 29/ In section 2.2.1.3.14 Note, remove "or a particular ADS-ground-user - ADS-ground-user pairing". 30/ In section 2.2.1.4.2.1, replace "882" by "8824". 31/ (Deleted) 32/ In section 2.2.2.5.1.1 Note 3, remove "(see 4.3.3.1.2.4)" 33/ In sections 2.2.2.5.4.1.1 a), 2.2.2.5.4.3.1 a), 2.2.2.5.4.4.1 a), change Originator parameter to parameter. 34/ In section 2.2.2.5.4.7.1 a) set Originator, user data and invalid-qos-parameter in italics. 35/ In Table 2.2.2.5-18, replace aDS-provider-abort-PDU with value communications-service-failure to "communications-service-failure" 36/ In section 2.2.2.5.3.5.3.2 change "it shall" by "the responding ADS-RF-ASE shall" 37/ In section 2.2.1.3.14.2.1, set "in italics Reason" == Part 3 (CPDLC) ============== 1/ [CCB - 97050019 6/] In section 2.3.5.6.6.1 replace "CPDLC-air-ASE" by "CPDLC-ground-ASE". 2/ (invalidated by PDR 98120009/12) In note 3 of section 2.3.3.3.7, replace: ."to to" by "to", ."whta" by "what" ."dialogue provider service" by "dialogue service provider" 3/ (invalidated by PDR 98120009/12)In note 3 of section 2.3.3.4.7, replace: ."dialogue provider service" by "dialogue service provider" 4/ In note 2 of section 2.3.3.4.7, replace: . "CPDLC dialogue" by "DSC dialogue" 5/ In section 2.3.7.2.2 Note 2, replace "ground system another aircraft" by "ground system with another aircraft". 6/ In section 2.3.7.2.2 Note 4, replace "by a the CPDLC" by "by a CPDLC" 7/ In section 2.3.7.3.11.5.1, replace "eith" by "with" 8/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.1 note 4, replace "paramter" by "parameter" 9/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.1 note 5, replace "paramter" by "parameter", "these SARPs" by "section 2.3.7" and "give" by "gives" 10/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.1 note 6, replace "CPDLC-end-service" by "CPDLC-end service" 11/ Section 2.3.7.4.2.2.1 a), replace "paramter" by "parameter". 12/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.9, set "Result" in italics. 13/ In section 2.3.7.4.5.1.2, replace "the air-user" by "the CPDLC-air-user". 14/ In section 2.3.7.5.1.2.5, replace "CPDLC-response" by "CPDLC-start response" 15/ In section 2.3.7.5.1.2.6, replace "CPDLC-response" by "CPDLC-start response" 16/ In section 2.3.7.5.1.2.7, replace "If CPDLC-start indication" by "If a CPDLC-start indication". 17/ Section 2.3.7.5.4.1 note 5, "these SARPs" by "section 2.3.7" and "give" by "gives" 18/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1 note 6, "DSC-end-service" by "DSC-end service" 19/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1.2.1, replace "accepted. by "accepted". 20/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1.3.1, replace "accepted. by "accepted". 21/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1.4.2 b), replace "rejected. by "rejected". 22/ In section 2.3.7.5.4.1.5.2 d) 2), replace "rejected. by "rejected". 23/ In section 2.3.7.1 Note 5, replace "in the in the" by "in the". 24/ In section 2.3.7.2.1.6 a), replace "aircraft identification" to "aircraft flight identification". 25/ In section 2.3.5.1.1. Note 3, remove "See 4.4.3.". 26/ In section 2.3.7.3.11.2.1, set "CPDLC Message" in italics. 27/ In section 2.3.7.3.11.8.3, replace "LOGICAL, ACKNOWLEDGMENT" by "LOGICAL ACKNOWLEDGEMENT". 28/ In section 2.3.7.4.1.2.2, replace by " parameter". 29/ In sections 2.3.7.4.1.2.4, 2.3.7.4.1.2.5, 2.3.7.4.1.2.6, 2.3.7.4.1.2.7, replace "CPDLC-response" by "CPDLC-start response". 30/ In sections 2.3.7.4.1.2.7 c) and 2.3.7.4.1.3.1 c), replace "CPDLC-start indication" by "in the CPDLC-start request". 31/ In section 2.3.7.4.1.2.8, replace "If CPDLC-start" by "If a CPDLC-start". 32/ In section 2.3.7.4.2.2.1, replace "in DSC-start" by "in the DSC-start". 33/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.1 note 2, replace "CPDLC-end-confirmation" by "CPDLC-end confirmation". 34/ In section 2.3.7.4.4.2.9, replace "invoking CPDLC-end" by "invoking a CPDLC-end". 35/ In sections 2.3.7.4.6.2.1 b) and 2.3.7.4.6.3.1 b) replace "current-data authority-abort" by "current-data-authority-abort". 36/ In section 2.3.7.5.3.1.2, replace the "ground-user" by "CPDLC-ground-user". 37/ in section 2.3.7.3.5.1, replace "CPDLC-user" by "CPDLC-air-user". 38/ in section 2.3.7.3.6.1, replace "CPDLC-user" by "CPDLC-ground-user". 39/ In section 2.3.7.4.1.2.1, replace "CPDLC-user" by "CPDLC-air-user". 40/ Add section 2.3.7.5.1.2.8 as follows: Upon receipt of a CPDLC-start service indication, the CPDLC-ground-user shall invoke a CPDLC-start service response within 0.5 seconds. 41/ In Section 2.3.4.2.1, in the ASN.1 comment to the definition Frequencyvhf, change 118.0000 to 118.000 42/ In section 2.3.4.2.1, in the ASN.1 definition of UM215, replace "uM215 DirectionDegrees" by "uM215DirectionDegrees" 43/ In section 2.3.4.2.1, in the ASN.1 definition of DM113, replace "SpeedTypeSpeedTypeSpeedType Speed" by "peedTypeSpeedTypeSpeedTypeSpeed" == Part 4 (FIS) ============ 1/ In section 2.4.5.1.1 Note 3, remove "(see 4.3.3).". 2/ In section 2.4.7.4 Note 4, replace "the FIS-demand-contract" by "the FIS-update-contract" 3/ In section 2.4.7.4.2, replace "the FIS-demand-contract" by "the FIS-update-contract" Sub-Volume III ------------------- == Part 1 (AMHS) ============== (no change) == Part 2 (AIDC) ============= (no change) Sub-Volume IV ------------------- (no change) Sub-Volume V ------------------ 1/ Section 5.3.2.2.2.1, item a) and b) Increase indent of items a) and b) and of the subsequent line containing the single word "or" 2/ Section 5.3.5.2.13.7, item b) Replace "loc-RIB" by "Loc-RIB" 3/ Section 5.3.5.2.13.8, item b) Delete full stop following 5.3.5.2.12.2 4/ Section 5.3.5.2.13.8, item c) Delete full stop following 5.3.5.2.12.3 5/ Section 5.3.5.2.13.8, item c) Replace "loc-RIB" by "Loc-RIB" 6/ Table in Section 5.3.5.2.14.1 a) 7th line (Item = noIDRP-a): Replace in the column ATN SARPs Reference "5.3.2.12.3" by "5.3.5.2.12.3" b) 8th line (Item = noIDRP-ag): Replace in the column ATN SARPs Reference "5.3.2.12.2" by "5.3.5.2.12.2" c) 9th line (Item = lvSubnet): Replace in the column ATN SARPs Reference "5.3.2.13" by "5.3.5.2.13" 7/ Table in Section 5.3.5.2.14.2 8th line (Item = initIDRP-ar): Replace in the column ATN SARPs Reference "5.3.2.10" by "5.3.5.2.10" 8/ Section 5.6.3.1 Delete full stop at the end of the line 9/ Table in Section 5.6.4.4 22nd line (Item = ePRI-s): Replace "ePRI-s" by "ePri-s" in the first column 10/ Table in Section 5.6.4.4 23rd line (Item = ePRI-r): a) Replace "ePRI-r" by "ePri-r" in the first column b) Align reference number with left side of box in 3rd column 11/ Table in Section 5.6.4.6 19th line (Item = edPri-s): Replace "ePRI-s:M" by "ePri-s:M" in the columns Status and ATN Support 12/ Table in Section 5.6.4.6 20th line (Item = edPri-r): Replace "ePRI-r:M" by "ePri-r:M" in the columns Status and ATN Support 13/ Table in Section 5.6.4.9 13th line (Item = eqPRR-s): Replace "ePrr-s:M" by "ePRR-s:M" in the columns Status and ATN Support 14/ Table in Section 5.6.4.9 14th line (Item = eqPRR-r): Replace "ePrr-r:M" by "ePRR-r:M" in the columns Status and ATN Support 15/ Table in Section 5.6.4.10 13th line (Item = epPRR-s): Replace "ePr-s:M" by "ePRR-s:M" in the column Status and "ePrr-s:M" by "ePRR-s:M" in the column ATN Support 16/ Table in Section 5.6.4.10 14th line (Item = epPRR-r): Replace "ePr-r:M" by "ePRR-r:M" in the column Status and "ePrr-r:M" by "ePRR-r:M" in the column ATN Support 17) Table in Section 5.6.4.14 22nd line (Item = idPri-r): Replace "iPRi:M" by "iPri:M" in the column Status 18/ Table in Section 5.6.4.16 22nd line (Item = iqPri-r): Replace "iPRi:M" by "iPri:M" in the column Status 19/ Table in Section 5.6.4.17 22nd line (Item = ipPri-r): Replace "iPRi:M" by "iPri:M" in the column Status 20/ Section 5.7.6.3.4.1.1, item g) Add paragraph break after ".. generated." Edit font of sentence starting with "Table 5.7-6 Mapping ." to become table heading 21/ Section 5.7.6.5.2.2, item a) Change font size of text 22/ Section 5.7.6.5.7.1.1 Change "Figure 5.7-10" to "Figure 5.7-9" 23/ Table 5.8-5 2nd line: Replace "KBits/sec" by "Kbits/sec" Assigned SME: All SMEs Proposed SARPs amendment: See "Summary of Defect". SME Recommendation to CCB: - CCB Decision: CCB-8 (Honolulu): SUBMITTED (18/01/99) CCB-8 (Honolulu): ACCEPTED (18/01/99) CCB-9 (Naples): RESOLVED (21/01/99)