Title: ICAO 9705 Edition 2 - Editorial Errors PDR Reference: 99070001 Originator Reference: - SARPs Document Reference: All Doc 9705 sub-volumes Status: SUBMITTED Impact: E (Editorial) PDR Revision Date: 02/12/99 item CM-2, ADS-9, AIDC-1&2 added. 22/11/99 item ADS-6 to ADS-8 added. 16/11/99 item CPDLC-2 added 12/11/99 (items V-13 to V-25 and V-30 moved to PDR 99010004, items V-26 to V-29 renamed V-13 to V-16, item CM-1 added) 29/10/99 (Updated with SME5 input 13-30) 18/10/99 (Updated with SME5 input) PDR Submission Date: 19/07/99 Submitting State/Organization: CCB Submitting Author Name: CCB Chair Submitting Author E-mail Address: atnp_ccb_chair@cenatls.cena.dgac.fr Submitting Author Supplemental Contact Information: SARPs Date: ICAO 9705 Edition 2, 11/99 SARPs Language: English Summary of Defect: Note: In the following, means text in italics and [text] means text in bold. Sub-Volume I ----------------- (Tokyo WGW meeting here) Sub-Volume II ------------------ == Part 1 (CM) 1 add the header number 2.1.1.1 to the first section 2 (CM editor): in 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.3 b), c), d), remove "the CM-ground-ASE" (Tokyo WGW meeting here) == Part 2 (ADS) =============== 1 (source: RTCA SC-189/EUROCAE 53)/ Delete the note of section 2.2.1.7.1.5.2 (the note is made obsolete by PDR 98120003). 2 (source: RTCA SC-189/EUROCAE 53)/ In section 2.2.1.7.1.5.5.a)1), replace "FOM set to 0" with "the FOM element set to 0" (clarification). 3 (source: RTCA SC-189/EUROCAE 53)/ Replace 2.2.1.7.1.4.1 by the following text: "[Recommandation.-] " (this was before a requirement "shall" which could not be always met). 4 (source: SME2)/ In sections 2.2.2.2.2.1 and 2.2.2.2.2.2, replace "ARF-user" by "ADS-RF-user" (3 occurrences). 5 (source: SME2)/ In section 2.2.2.5.1.1 note 3, delete "(see 4.3.3.1.2.4)". 6 (source: SME2)/ In section 2.2.1.7.6.3.4, replace "ADS-air user" by "ADS-air-user". 7 (source: SME2)/ In table 2.2.1.5-15, replace "PDU Element Name" by "Parameter Name". 8 (source: SME2)/ In section 2.2.2.6.1.1, replace "The ADS application" by "The ADS report forwarding application" 9 (source : SME2)/ In section 2.2.1.5.3.1.1, note 3, replace "state Tables" by "state tables" (Tokyo WGW meeting here) == Part 3 (CPDLC) ================= 1 (source: SME2)/ In section 2.3.5.1.1 note 3, delete "see 4.4.3". 2 (source: SG2)/ In section 2.4.3.2.1, in the ASN.1 definition of uplink message 152, change the field identifier from "uM152DistanceSpecifiedOffsetDirection" to "uM152DistanceSpecifiedDirection". (Tokyo WGW meeting here) == Part 4 (FIS) =============== 1 (source: WG3/SG2)/ Replace 2.4.7.2.3.1 by the following text: "[Recommandation.-] " (this was before a requirement "shall" which could not be always met). (Tokyo WGW meeting here) Sub-Volume III ------------------- == Part 1 (AMHS) ============== (Tokyo WGW meeting here) == Part 2 (AIDC) ============= 1. (source: SME3) section 3.2.3.7.8.1.4.2, replace at the end of the sentence "syntax TransferCommunication" with "syntax TransferComm". 2. (source SME3) section 3.2.3.7.9.1.4.2, replace at the end of the sentence "syntax TransferCommunicationAssume" with "syntax TransferCommAssume". (Tokyo WGW meeting here) Sub-Volume IV ------------------- (Tokyo WGW meeting here) Sub-Volume V ------------------ 1. Table in Para 5.3.5.2.16.3 For Item "RelateDTE-ai" change in the column "ATN SARPs Reference" the current entry 5.3.5.2.3.1.1.5 to read 5.3.5.2.3.2.2 2. Table 5.8-2 For Item "ISH-" change in the column "ISO Status" the current entry CI:O to read CI:M For Item "ISH-" change in the column "Item " the current entry ISH- to read ISH-r For Item "ISH-" change in the column "Item " the current entry ISH- to read ISH-s 3. Table 5.8-2 - For Item "MSNC-s" change in the column "ATN Support " the current entry ISH-s:M to read ISH-s and AGR:M - For Item "MSNC-r" change in the column "ATN Support " the current entry ISH-r:M to read ISH-r and ABR:M - After Table 5.8-2 add the following two lines: "AGR: If the Intermediate System is an ATN Air/Ground Router, then AGR is true, else AGR is false." "ABR: If the Intermediate System is an ATN Airborne Router, then ABR is true, else ABR is false." 4. Section 5.8.3.5.14 Add paragraph number in front of section heading 5. Section 5.3.5.2.7.3 Replace "Connection" by "connection" 6. Section 5.3.5.2.15 Replace "connection" by "Connection" 7. Section 5.5.2.2.14 Replace "Note 4" by "Note 1" Replace "Note 5" by "Note 2" 8. Section 5.5.2.8.1.6.1, Table Heading Replace "feature" by "Feature" 9. Section 5.6.4.3, Column Capability Replace "ISO 8208" by "ISO/IEC 8208" 10. Table 5.7-3, Heading Replace "Hexadecimal value" by "Binary value" Replace "Clearing Cause" by "Diagnostic Code" 11. Section 5.3.5.2.6.5 Replace "... uplinked ISH PDU. The Mobile Subnetwork Capability Parameter shall indicate any restrictions ..." by "... uplinked ISH PDU indicating any restrictions ..." 12. Section 5.8.2.1.4 Delete "The" at the start of the text 13. In Figure 5.7-4 replace "Segmentation" by "Sequencing" in the legend of the figure 14. In Figure 5.7-5 replace "Segmentation" by "Sequencing" in the legend of the figure 15. In Para 5.8.1.2.1 replace "... with the exception of Airborne Routers ..." by "... with the exception of ATN Airborne Routers ...". 16. In Para 5.8.1.2.2 replace "Airborne Routers ..." by "ATN Airborne Routers ...". (Tokyo WGW meeting here) Assigned SME: All SMEs Proposed SARPs amendment: See "Summary of Defect". SME Recommendation to CCB: - CCB Decision: atnp_ccb_chair: SUBMITTED (19/09/99) CCB-11 (Tokyo): wait next WGW to close this PDR