Title: Edition 3 - All SV - Editorials PDR Reference: M2030004 Originator Reference: - SARPs Document Reference: Edition 3 Status: ACCEPTED Impact: E PDR Revision Date: 08/11/02 (ULCS-5) 05/11/02 (CM-20) 25/10/02 (ULCS-4) 14/10/02 (CPDLC-3) 3/10/02 (security related changes: CM-2 to CM-19, ADS-2 to ADS-3, ARF-2 to ARF-3, CPDLC-2, FIS-5) 23/09/02 (new text for change SEC-17) 16/09/02 (SEC-7 to SEC-21) 04/09/02 (CM-1, ARF-1, ADS-1, CPDLC-1 and FIS-1 withdrawn) 30/08/02 (SEC-1 to SEC-6, FIS-2 to FIS-4) 05/04/02 (ULCS-1/ to ULCS-3/) PDR Submission Date: Submitting State/Organization: CCB Submitting Author Name: Submitting Author E-mail Address: Submitting Author Supplemental Contact Information: SARPs Date: 2002 SARPs Language: English Summary of Defect: This PDR records the editorial errors for all Doc 9705 Edition 3 sub-volumes. The PDR will be kept open up to the publication of the next edition or amendment. See proposed changes below. Assigned SME: SV2 SME Proposed SARPs amendment: SV-II CM-1/ Change withdrawn (integral/integer number of octets). CM-2/ 2.1.7.2.1.4 Note, add: "However, the CM-user is responsible for validating the key agreement public key certificates." CM-3/ In 2.3.3.10.2, 2.1.3.4.8.3, 2.1.3.4.8.3 Note, 2.1.3.5.6.1, 2.1.3.6.6.1, 2.1.3.7.7.1, 2.1.5.3.2.3.1 Note, 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.1 Note, 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.2 Note, 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.3 Note, 2.1.6.3.2.1, 2.1.6.3.2.3, 2.1.6.3.2.3 Note, 2.1.7.2.7.5, change "Exchange supporting key management" to "Secured Dialogue Supporting Key Management" CM-4/ In 2.1.3.4.8.4, 2.1.3.4.8.4 Note, 2.1.3.5.6.2, 2.1.3.6.6.2, 2.1.3.7.7.2, 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.1 Note, 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.2 Note, 2.1.6.2.3.2, 2.1.6.2.3.2 Note, 2.1.7.2.7.5, change "Secured exchange" to "Secured Dialogue" CM-5/ In 2.1.7.2.2.6 b) and c), 2.1.7.2.3.2 b) and c), change "...optionally, key agreement public keys..." to "...optionally, authentic key agreement public keys..." CM-6/ In 2.1.5.3.2.2.1.1, 2.1.5.3.2.2.1.2, 2.1.5.3.2.2.1.3, 2.1.5.3.2.3.1, 2.1.5.3.2.3.2, 2.1.5.3.2.4.1.1, 2.1.5.3.2.4.1.2, 2.1.5.3.2.4.1.3, 2.1.5.3.2.4.2.1, 2.1.5.3.2.4.2.2, 2.1.5.3.2.4.2.3, 2.1.5.3.3.2.2, 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.3, change all occurences of "[" to "CMGroundMessage [" CM-7/ In 2.1.5.3.3.2.1, 2.1.5.3.3.2.3, 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.2, 2.1.5.3.3.4.1, 2.1.5.3.3.4.2, 2.1.5.3.3.4.3, 2.1.5.3.3.4.4, change all occurences of "[" to "CMAircraftMessage [" CM-8/ In 2.1.3.5.6.1, change "When the CM-ground-user requires a secure CM-update service and a previous CM-logon has not been performed with the CM ground system which is to be contacted, the Security Required..." to "When the CM-ground-user requires a secure CM-update service and up-to-date security information has not already been established between that airborne system and the CM ground system (i.e. a current session key is not shared), the Security Required..." CM-9/ In 2.1.3.5.6.2, change "When the CM-ground-user requires a secure CM-update service and a previous CM-logon has been performed with the CM ground system which is to be contacted, the Security Required parameter..." to "When the CM-ground-user requires a secure CM-update service and up-to-date security information has already been established between that airborne system and the CM ground system (i.e.a current session key is shared), the Security Required..." CM-10/ In 2.1.3.5.6.3, change "When the CM-ground-user requires an unsecure CM-update service, the Security Required parameter..." to "When the CM-ground-user requires an unsecure CM-update service and the CM aircraft system is not Version 1, the Security Required parameter..." CM-11/ In 2.1.3.5.6.4, change "If a CM dialogue does not exist when a CM-ground-user..." to "If a CM dialogue does not already exist between the CM ground system and CM aircraft system, and the CM aircraft system is not Version 1, then when a CM-ground-user..." CM-12/ 2.1.3.9.5.3 Note 2, Delete. CM-13/ 2.1.3.9.6 Note, change "...parameter will also the aircraft's..." to "...parameter will also contain the aircraft's..." CM-14/ In 2.1.3.5.4.2 Note, Delete. CM-15/ 2.1.5.3.3.6.2, add new Note: Note. - The CM version number is not included in the D-START response primitive if the CM-gnd-ASE version number is less than or equal to the CM-air-ASE version number. CM-16/ Add new note: 2.1.7.2.2.7 c) Note. - A CM-air-user will not provide security information if an unsecure dialogue is being maintained. CM-17/ In 2.1.3.9.9.1, change "Exchange supporting key management" to "Secured Dialogue" CM-18/ in 2.1.6.2.3.1, Delete " and CM-forward service" CM-19/ In 2.1.6.2.3.3 Add: For CM version 2, the Security Requirements parameter of the D-START shall be set to either "Secured Dialogue" or "No security" for the CM-forward service. CM-20/ In 2.1.7.1.2.11, the cross-reference to 2.1.7.1.1.5 should be 2.1.7.1.2.5. ARF-1/ Change withdrawn (integral/integer number of octets). ARF-2/ In 2.2.2.3.4.8.1, 2.2.2.5.3.4.6 Note, 2.2.2.6.2.3.1, change "secured exchange" to "secured dialogue". ARF-3/ In 2.2.2.5.3.4.6 Note, change "Not security" to "no security" ADS-1/ Change withdrawn (integral/integer number of octets). ADS-2/ In 2.2.1.3.4.8.1, 2.2.1.3.5.8.1, 2.2.1.3.6.8.1, 2.2.1.5.3.15.6 Note, 2.2.1.6.2.3.1,2.2.1.7.1.1.3.2, change "secured exchange" to "secured dialogue". ADS-3/ In 2.2.1.5.3.15.6 Note, change "Not security" to "no security" CPDLC-1/ Change withdrawn (integral/integer number of octets). CPDLC-2/ In 2.3.3.3.8.1, 2.3.3.4.8.1, 2.3.3.8.9.1, 2.3.5.3.3.1 Note,2.3.5.3.3.2 Note, 2.3.5.3.3.3 Note, 2.3.5.3.3.4 Note, 2.3.5.5.3.3 Note, 2.3.6.2.3.1 change "secured exchange" to "secured dialogue". CPDLC-3/ In 2.3.3.3.8.1, replace "CDPCL-start" with "CPDLC-start" FIS-1/ Change withdrawn (integral/integer number of octets). FIS-2/ In section 2.4.3.4.9.1, change "secure exchange" to "secured exchange". FIS-3/ In section 2.4.7.2.1.1.1, change "the ADS-air-user" to "the version 2 FIS-air-user". FIS-4/ In section 2.4.7.2.1.1.1 b), change "FIS-demand-contract request" to "FIS-demand-contract or FIS-update-contract request" FIS-5/ In 2.4.3.3.9.1, 2.4.3.4.9.1, 2.4.5.3.12.7 Note, 2.4.6.2.3.1, 2.4.7.2.1.1.1 b) change "secured exchange" to "secured dialogue". SV-IV ULCS-1/ In Table 4.3-5, insert closing parenthesis ")" at the end of the p7 row ULCS-2/ In 4.3.3.4.1.2.2, Note 2, replace "know" with "known" ULCS-3/ After Table 4.4-2, the text "Functional units added by efficiency enhancement amendment" should be a Note. ULCS-4/ In 4.1.5.2, adjust indentation so that: "Reqrequest;" becomes "Req request;" "Rspresponse;" becomes "Rsp response;" "Cnfconfirmation;" becomes "Cnf confirmation;" ULCS-5/ In 4.2.3.2.1 Note 7, renumber bullets e) f) and g) as a) b) and c), respectively. SV-VIII SEC-1/ 8.5.7.2.1: Relabel the first Note as Note 1 and the second Note as Note 2. SEC-2/ 8.5.7.2.1: Remove the revision marks for 2^64 in Note 1. SEC-3/ 8.6.3.10.2: Insert the word "should" between "Field" and "include": Recommendation. - The criteria for verification of the Time Field should include a relationship to the transit delay associated with the Class of Communication requested for the application dialogue. SEC-4/ 8.5.4.2.3.1: The comma after 01 base 16 should not be subscripted with the 16. SEC-5/ 8.5.4.2.3.3: Remove the italics for "= 20". SEC-6/ 8.6.3.12.1.a: Remove the extra space between "it" and "for". SEC-7/ 8.1.1 The ATN provisions are intended to provide a general mechanism for all types of aeronautical communication. Therefore, delete "ATS" in "secure exchange of ATS information". SEC-8/ 8.3.1.4.1 Double period at end of first Note. SEC-9/ 8.3.1.4.2 Double period at end SEC-10/ 8.3.1.4.3 Double period at end SEC-11/ 8.3.1.4.5 "CRLS" should be "CRLs" SEC-12/ 8.4.4.2.5.1 Reference to 8.4.3.2.8.4 is incorrect. Should be 8.4.3.1.3.9.4 SEC-13/ 8.5 In first Note: "principal" not "principle" SEC-14/ 8.5.2 Definition of a: insert "of" between "set" and "elliptic curve domain parameters" SEC-15/ 8.5.5.2.2.1 In bullet d) 11), delete "the" in "then the output 'valid' " SEC-16/ 8.6.1 Note 3. The definition of a single flight should encompass gate-to-gate, i.e. including ground manoeuvring, and not just "takeoff and landing", therefore REPLACE "single flight (defined as a takeoff and landing)" WITH "single flight segment (from gate to gate, including pre-and post-flight activities)". SEC-17/ 8.6.1 Note 6. REPLACE "each pair of ground ULCS peers" WITH "each pair of ULCS peers" SEC-18/ 8.6.3.9.1 Insert cross-reference to 8.5.5.2.1 when ASP is invoked in bullet d). SEC-19/ 8.6.3.10.1 Insert cross-reference to 8.5.5.2.2 when AVP is invoked in bullet f). SEC-20/ 8.6.3.11.1 Insert cross-reference to 8.5.6.2.1 when AMACP is invoked in bullet i). SEC-21/ 8.6.3.12.1 Insert cross-reference to 8.5.6.2.2 when AMACVP is invoked in bullet j). Impact on Interoperability: PDR Validation Status: SME Recommendation to CCB: RESOLVED before next publication CCB Decision: CCB-15 (phuket): ACCEPTED CCB-16 (toulouse): ??